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Writing Something..

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Saya hanya ingin mencoba jujur sama kamu.

Di sini pengarang cerita mempertegas niatnya memberitahukan pembaca, tidak hanya mengenai tone cara ngomongnya, tapi juga kemungkinan hal menarik yang menyertainya.

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Either I survive or I live.

A strong opening line. Artinya apa ya? Situasi apa yang bikin seseorang merasa seperti ini? Dan tema! Harapan atau Optimisme. Perjuangan sebagai manusia. The inner being. This may hold promise.

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Either I let it go or I do something.

Oh yes, I’m hooked. I don’t know about you but I’m hooked. D*mn! 😆

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It’s these little things that f*ck me up but there’s no way you still care.

Dan kemudian si pengarang cerita langsung menyia-nyiakan awalan yang ada dengan memuntahkan kalimat konyol kayak di atas itu. 😆 Sungguh, ini ngga penting. Kenapa juga saya ngga bisa mengenali tokoh protagonis-nya sebelum saya tahu masalah mereka? Kayak minta dikasihani gitu. I mean, that every girl or guy’s right. There’s no way I still care.

Well, this is just how it goes. I don’t know.

You know?

Curhat Colongan, Dodolz, iseng!, ngga jelas

Just Another Day

She has had a decent morning so far. It’s work day. She has made her list and ready to take on the day. It’s beautiful out and she can’t wait to feel the brisk air when she opens the door…

So, she drove her car, arrive the office, buy a cup a coffee at the mini-market next door, have a little chat with a friend there, back to the office, open the laptop and start working.

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It’s 4.21 PM in the evening now… The coffee run cold, and still raining outside.. She wonder where did the morning go.